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date: Wednesday, January 7, 2009
title: smothered screams
time: 6:23 PM
smothered screamsSchool didn't suck, surprisingly, albeit for the screwed up essay I wrote for the diagnostic test today. I mean, 350 words as a limit is... LIMITING, to me. I need at least 600 words max. ._. The essay was rushed at the end, so yeah, it sucks. Anyway, today was normal. English was spent with the diagnostic test. Science was spent.... discovering the wonders of energy Mr Goh: and Chor Beng, being the horny bastard he was, and then it was recess! I spent it in class eating a hot dog and writing the Prologue of 'Crimson Tears'. Pffft. CE was boring. I wrote the first chapter, then it was assembly. Mr Hafiz talked about discipline and yadayadayada that we heard last year. But 'twas funny. He even joked around during it. Haha. THEN, it was the most fun-est lesson of the day (I'm joking.), Art! We spent half an hour copying the meanings of 'Principles of Art' and the rest on drawing spheres. I thought mine looked quite good. Lol. Mehhh, there's MT tomorrow. Hatehatehate it. Anyway, there's nothing else to write ._. Bye --- EXCEPTTTT, the draft of the prologue! Crimson Tears Prologue "Didn't we promise each other? That we would be together, forever?" Yae and Sae Kurosawa. Twins, destined to participate in the Crimson Sacrifice, where one twin kills the other. "I'll wait for you, till the very end" Yae had left her sister behind and escaped the village. All because she did not want her sister to be killed by her hand. Little did she know, her sister was forced to be hung. "Quickly! Hang Sae before the Repentance occurs!" Sae had been hung on the last Torii gate leading to the Hellish Abyss. As Sae's killing did not appease the Abyss, it rumbled threateningly. "No! Th-the Repentance! I-its happening!" Yae continued to wander in the forest aimlessly. She did not know that the Repentance had occured. "HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!" Sae's spirit, tainted with the malice of hell and nothing but a macabre puppet, brought forth all the sacrificed spirits, including Seijiro Makabe, the last Kusabi to be sacrificed. Her dreaded laughter filled the night as she conducted a massacre, with the help of Seijiro. The slaughter was endless. Nothing could describe its horror. "HAHAHAHAHAHA! Go on! Run! Run! Go on!" Finally, the killing ended, but with a price. Minakami Village was wiped off the map and was trapped in an eternal limbo, forced to relive the horrible night again and again. "I'm so sorry... I'm.. so sorry." Yae stood at the Torii gate leading to the village, without a trace of her memory. She just kept repeating apologies. The village was forever dark, until, that is, the twins Zalethio and Zalethe Ciel stumbled upon it. ----------------------------------------- PFFFt. Just give your comments, ya? It's a draft. Kthxbai. Labels: writing |